Before This chess whizz will be someone to look out for! After This chess wiz will be someone to look out for! Notes: Whizz vs. wiz Click on each word to know the difference in usage.
Before Sometimes even one motivated person can bring about a big change. After Sometimes, all it takes is one person to make a difference. Notes Inserted a comma after 'sometimes' Changed the sentence to pack in a punch.
Headline Before - A sneak peak into life in Pyeongchang beyond the #Winter Olympics. After- A sneak peek into life in Pyeongchang beyond the #Winter Olympics Notes #wordchoice Peak vs. peek
Before The timelier and more enhanced the insights, the greater an organisation’s ability to stay ahead. After Timely insights enable an organisation to stay ahead. Notes: 'The timelier and more enhanced the insights' is not parallel. So I have rephrased. Also, timelier? We only say timely. Do not say 'organisation's' , i.e, do not form the possessive of a non-living thing. Have also cut down the sentence for brevity.
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