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Sentence 37

Before: XYZ feels, ABC Corp has shown remarkable growth adapting to the ever-changing world of digital media and communications.  After: "XYZ observes that ABC Corp has shown remarkable growth adapting to the dynamic world of digital media and communications." Notes: Avoid using 'feels' in business communication. It is a very 'emotional' word. I've replaced 'ever-changing'  with 'dynamic' - a question of word choice.