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Before Led by Gopichand himself, Ramesh Nagapuri Dronacharya awardee, senior coach from the Sports Authority of India (SAI), takes care of the daily operations. After Led by Gopichand,  Ramesh Nagapuri, a Dronacharya awardee and senior coach from the Sports Authority of India (SAI), takes care of the daily operations. Comments himself is unnecessary Ramesh Nagapuri is a Dronacharya awardee so the comma is necessary The indefinite article 'a' is required before 'Dronacharya awardee' The after sentence means that Ramesh Nagapuri is a Dronacharya awardee as well as a senior coach from SAI. The question/comment to the writer was ' How many people are you talking about?   Please check if this is what you mean.'

Before This evolution of business in India has been stimulated by the government-led ecosystem which hosts a number of ambitious projects such as Startup India, Make in India, Digital India and Skill India. After Start-ups in India have received a big fillip from the government, which hosts a number of ambitious projects, such as Startup India, Make in India, Digital India, and Skill India. Notes: In the before version, there should have been a comma before "which" . I have rewritten the first part of the sentence "This evolution of business in India has been stimulated by the government-led ecosystem" so that the emphasis is on start-ups and the government.

Before In a changing environment where the new keywords are cloud, automation, data-led analytics, IoT, and mobility, the solutions expected from IT service providers as well as the nature of their delivery are undergoing a change.  After In a business scenario where the buzzwords are cloud, automation, data-led analytics, IoT, and mobility, the solutions expected from IT service providers, as well as the nature of their delivery, are undergoing a change. Notes:  Changed 'changing environment' to 'business scenario' since it gives context. Keywords are for blogs or SEO; buzzwords are " a word or phrase, often an item of jargon, that is fashionable at a particular time or in a particular context. " This was an issue of word choice.  'as well as the nature of their delivery' is a non- restrictive clause. This means that even if you take the clause out of the sentence, it will still make sense. The rule ...