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Before With simple beginnings in Dubai’s budding market of 1994, to two decades of outsourcing excellence, XYZ has had a very exciting journey. After From small beginnings in Dubai’s nascent market in 1994, XYZ has had a very exciting journey to achieving outsourcing excellence. Notes: You say "small beginnings", not "simple beginnings".  Word choice - budding replaced with nascent Swapped order of following phrases to make the sentence more readable and clear. "to two decades of outsourcing excellence, XYZ has had a very exciting journey."