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Sentence 3

I've made the AFTER version parallel, by starting all the bullets with nouns and restructuring the lead-in sentence for clarity. BEFORE BUSINESS CHALLENGES The company’s efficiency was affected their existing business process plan. ·        They had difficulty integrating software-development functions with IT operations. ·        They experienced higher cycle with respect to the release cycle and provisioning and deployment of digital application facing lower agility, time to market and business/product group dissatisfaction ·        There was limited transparency with operation processes and the service-levels were also under observation. ·        There was bureaucracy at every stage and a lack of good governance ·        The processes and tools were non-standardized and a lack of automation AFTER BUSINESS CHALL...