Before
However, I believe there are a few truths that the frenzy over growth hacking often tends to gloss over or miss.
After
However, in all the frenzy raised by growth hacking, I believe there are a couple of truisms that are often glossed over.
Notes:
Truth vs. Truism - Word Choice
few truths vs. couple of truisms
There were only 2 truisms raised in the article from which I took the 'before' version. So I felt it more appropriate to say 'couple of truisms'.
Rephrased the 'after' sentence for clarity of thought and expression.
Before: Our children are our future, is an often quoted statement, which ideally refers to the fact that it is our children who have the power to initiate growth, progress and change in the times to come. After: Our children are our future. This is an oft-quoted statement, which re-iterates that it is our children who have the power to initiate growth, progress and change in times to come. Notes a. Never place a comma before a verb. ‘Is’ - is a verb. b. 'often quoted’ is usually written as 'oft-quoted’ c. Don’t use ‘ideally’ unnecessarily. d. 'the times to come.’ to be changed to ‘times to come’. ‘The’ is a definite article. Please read up on the use of definite articles here: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/540/01/ e. Avoid constructions with ‘the fact that’ as much as possible.
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