Before
However, I believe there are a few truths that the frenzy over growth hacking often tends to gloss over or miss.
After
However, in all the frenzy raised by growth hacking, I believe there are a couple of truisms that are often glossed over.
Notes:
Truth vs. Truism - Word Choice
few truths vs. couple of truisms
There were only 2 truisms raised in the article from which I took the 'before' version. So I felt it more appropriate to say 'couple of truisms'.
Rephrased the 'after' sentence for clarity of thought and expression.
Before Sometimes even one motivated person can bring about a big change. After Sometimes, all it takes is one person to make a difference. Notes Inserted a comma after 'sometimes' Changed the sentence to pack in a punch.
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