Before
A team of urologists at the University of California, San Francisco, discovered that regular exposure to hot tubs could adversely impact male fertility.
After
A team of urologists at the University of California, San Francisco, discovered that regular exposure to hot tubs could have an adverse impact on male fertility.
Notes:
Please avoid using "impact" as a verb.
A team of urologists at the University of California, San Francisco, discovered that regular exposure to hot tubs could adversely impact male fertility.
After
A team of urologists at the University of California, San Francisco, discovered that regular exposure to hot tubs could have an adverse impact on male fertility.
Notes:
Please avoid using "impact" as a verb.
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