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I've made the AFTER version parallel, by starting all the bullets with nouns and restructuring the lead-in sentence for clarity.

BEFORE
BUSINESS CHALLENGES
The company’s efficiency was affected their existing business process plan.
·       They had difficulty integrating software-development functions with IT operations.
·       They experienced higher cycle with respect to the release cycle and provisioning and deployment of digital application facing lower agility, time to market and business/product group dissatisfaction
·       There was limited transparency with operation processes and the service-levels were also under observation.
·       There was bureaucracy at every stage and a lack of good governance
·       The processes and tools were non-standardized and a lack of automation

AFTER
BUSINESS CHALLENGES
The challenges faced by the company in its existing business plan included:
·       Difficulty in integrating software-development functions with IT operations
·       Release cycle time with lower agility, prolonged time to market and business/product group dissatisfaction
·       Operations that are not transparent due to higher cycles  and service-levels
·       Bureaucracy at every stage and a lack of good governance
·       Processes and tools that are non-standardized

·       Systems that are non-automated
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