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Before Not just surgical procedures, even routine healthcare check-ups are benefitting from new innovations in this space.  After Not only surgical procedures, but also routine health care check-ups are benefitting from innovations in this space.  Notes: I've changed the sentence construction model to "not only....but also..." "new innovations" is a tautology( synonyms: repetition, reiteration, redundancy, superfluity, duplication). Therefore, I've removed "new". Health care is two words according to m-w.com

Before Such buzz within consumer circles is music to the ears of brands. And they would be interested to know that 92% of consumers believe recommendations from friends and family over all forms of advertising, according to Nielsen.  After For brands, such buzz within consumer circles is music to their ears.. Neilson reports that 92% of consumers value recommendations from friends and family over all forms of advertising. Notes: 'Music to the ears of brands'  sounds odd. Hence rephrased. Try not to start a sentence with 'and' unnecessarily. believe vs. value - appropriate word choice. Changed the second sentence to active voice.

Before: 1)      The unique ID with which a patient is identified or the Subscriber ID After 1)      The unique ID used to identify a patient or the Subscriber ID Notes Avoid the use of "with which" since it sounds clumsy. Write the sentence in active voice.

Before Why, a mother who gave me birth, who educated me and always wished well for me – how could she bring me bad luck?” After How could a mother, who gave birth to me, who  educated me and always wished me well –   bring me bad luck?” Notes: Connected up the thought "How could a mother bring me bad luck" and split it up with the additional thoughts inserted by commas. Changed "who gave me birth" to "who gave birth to me" since that's the right expression. Changed "and always wished well for me" to "and always wished me well" since that's the expression used.