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Not just surgical procedures, even routine healthcare check-ups are benefitting from new innovations in this space. After
Not only surgical procedures, but also routine health care check-ups are benefitting from innovations in this space.
Notes:
- I've changed the sentence construction model to "not only....but also..."
- "new innovations" is a tautology( synonyms: repetition, reiteration, redundancy, superfluity, duplication). Therefore, I've removed "new".
- Health care is two words according to m-w.com
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