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Typically, in large medical claim datasets, unique diagnoses account for a considerable number.
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Unique diagnoses form a large part of medical claim datasets.
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Typically, in large medical claim datasets, unique diagnoses account for a considerable number.
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Unique diagnoses form a large part of medical claim datasets.
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- Avoid the words "typically", "basically", etc.
- Shortened the sentence to make it crisp. Revised the construction.
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