Before:
This creates a strong spirit of “one team” that pervades EXA’s workforce, irrespective of their projects, location and nationality.
After:
Collaboration creates a strong spirit of “one team” that pervades EXA’s workforce, irrespective of their projects, location and nationality.
Notes:
"This" is an unclear antecedent. I have replaced it with the word 'collaboration'.
This creates a strong spirit of “one team” that pervades EXA’s workforce, irrespective of their projects, location and nationality.
After:
Collaboration creates a strong spirit of “one team” that pervades EXA’s workforce, irrespective of their projects, location and nationality.
Notes:
"This" is an unclear antecedent. I have replaced it with the word 'collaboration'.
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