Before
The months of April and May were focused on the ‘H & B’ campaign for SP, where GCorp worked on the campaign from start to finish.
After
In April and May, we focused on the ‘H & B’ campaign for SP.
Notes
April and May will suffice. It is clear they are months.
The 'before' sentence hints that the months were focused on the H&B campaign. The onus is on "we" the people, not the months.
It seems unnecessary to state in the 'before' version that GCorp worked on the campaign from start to finish. It is hardly likely that any company would ditch the campaign halfway!
The months of April and May were focused on the ‘H & B’ campaign for SP, where GCorp worked on the campaign from start to finish.
After
In April and May, we focused on the ‘H & B’ campaign for SP.
Notes
April and May will suffice. It is clear they are months.
The 'before' sentence hints that the months were focused on the H&B campaign. The onus is on "we" the people, not the months.
It seems unnecessary to state in the 'before' version that GCorp worked on the campaign from start to finish. It is hardly likely that any company would ditch the campaign halfway!
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