Before
GCorp also had their hands full with regards to new business development, working on pitches for the first round of presentation for ICICI Bank and HDFC Bank.
After
GCorp also had its hands full with new business development, working on pitches for the first round of presentations for ICICI Bank and HDFC Bank.
Notes
When referring to a company use "its" not "their"
'Regards to' is unnecessary in the 'before' sentence.
There are two presentations - one for ICICI and another for HDFC, so the plural of presentation, with an 's' needs to be used.
GCorp also had their hands full with regards to new business development, working on pitches for the first round of presentation for ICICI Bank and HDFC Bank.
After
GCorp also had its hands full with new business development, working on pitches for the first round of presentations for ICICI Bank and HDFC Bank.
Notes
When referring to a company use "its" not "their"
'Regards to' is unnecessary in the 'before' sentence.
There are two presentations - one for ICICI and another for HDFC, so the plural of presentation, with an 's' needs to be used.
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