Before
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It’s time to bring this topic out in the open to help
couples cope better with this potential complication in a woman’s pregnancy
that, if neglected, could even impact her overall reproductive health.
After
--> --> It’s time to bring this topic out in the open to help couples cope better with miscarriage, which could have an impact on a woman’s overall reproductive health.
Notes.
Removed long-winded euphemisms to make writing crisp.
The use of impact as a verb is not recommended in good writing.
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