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Sentence 36


Before
ABC will act as a one stop for employees of XYZ and other companies housed within the campus to have access to features like ordering food online from outlets within the campus, check for parking facility, traffic management, gym facility, look for events happening within the campus, buy & sell items from employees within the campus etc. 

 After
ABC  will provide employees of XYZ and other companies housed within the campus access to certain features like ordering food online from outlets within the campus, checking for parking facility, managing traffic, [AL1] gym facility, looking for events happening within the campus, as well as buying and selling items from employees within the campus. 
 [AL1]Do you mean monitoring traffic

Notes:
  • Avoid 'one stop' or 'one-stop shop' . It's a cliche.
  • Changed 'check' to 'checking' to keep it parallel with 'ordering' that comes earlier in the sentence.
  • So in the whole sentence, we have 'ordering', 'checking', 'looking', 'buying', and 'selling'. 
  • Removed 'etc'.

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