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Implementing targeted measures to manage environmental impact have helped us reduce carbon emissions, optimize resource use, and minimize waste.
Notes:
The second half of the sentence was not parallel. So introduced verbs optimize( resource use) and minimize( waste) to add to 'reduce' (carbon emissions).
Learn more about parallelism in sentences here.
Implementing targeted measures to manage
environmental impacts have helped us reduce carbon emissions, resource use and waste.
Implementing targeted measures to manage environmental impact have helped us reduce carbon emissions, optimize resource use, and minimize waste.
Notes:
The second half of the sentence was not parallel. So introduced verbs optimize( resource use) and minimize( waste) to add to 'reduce' (carbon emissions).
Learn more about parallelism in sentences here.
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